HazerBaba Turkish Delight with Rose, Lemon & Mint – 1lb

Original: "John went to the store to buy some food. When he got there, he realized he had forgotten his wallet at home. So, he had to go back and get it. By the time he returned to the store, it was already closed. John felt frustrated and hungry as he walked back home."

Revised: "Realizing he had forgotten his wallet at home, John went to the store to buy some food. However, upon arrival, he had to return home to retrieve it. By the time he came back to the store, it was closed. Disappointed and hungry, John walked back home feeling frustrated."

Original: "The little girl was excited to go to the zoo. She had been looking forward to seeing the animals all week. As soon as they arrived, it began to rain heavily, and the zoo had to close. The little girl was so upset that she started to cry."

Revised: "Eager to go to the zoo, the little girl had been anticipating seeing the animals all week. Unfortunately, upon arrival, heavy rain forced the zoo to close. Upset by the situation, the little girl began to cry."

Original: "After studying for hours, Sarah finally took the exam. But she found it extremely difficult and was unsure of her answers. She left the exam feeling worried and anxious about her results."

Revised: "Having studied for hours, Sarah finally took the exam, only to find it extremely difficult and feel unsure about her answers. Leaving the exam, she felt worried and anxious about her results."

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